Friday, October 05, 2007

replies

here is a poem....that mr adi....a.k.a delhidreams posted....

"no no my heart
not the blazing sun
nor the brightest star possible
lets glow like a mellow moth
and wade through the night
to that beacon, this heaven's delight"

and well here is the reply....see what one can make of it....
"no no my love,
lets just fly into the sun,
that has lost its blaze...
into its melting sparkles,
on a darkening sea...
lets just be the spectators,
of a million stars...
lets not glow today,
and not make a myth of being
travelling stars today...
lets just float on water,
be the dried
"chinar" leaves on the Dal....
and float away ...home...
where ur smell lingers...
and heart fills up...
with u"

6 comments:

Movie Mazaa said...

:)

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Active to passive

Aparna Mudi said...

y the smile??? ???

mr gone case....
im sheerly always active..or am i???

adi...
time mila to kar doongi

Anonymous said...

hav u stopped writing??

pheebee

Aparna Mudi said...

no have not....on a writers block...well ok..u can laugh....as if im a some great writer...

meet_me said...

come back na .....
needing u desperately ...
take care