kalam daanto tale dabaye,
bahut der se soch rahi hai,
uska bas naam baar baar likha hai...
saare lamhe kaise samete woh,
un chand lafso mein?
woh ankahe shabd,
khato mein nahi piroye jaate....
kuch sitare, kuch choti choti dhadkane....
sab hai khat mein ....bas lavs ke alava
purane khat bikhare huye aas paas
kuch aansu ki boonde bhi
ab intezaar kar kar ke sookh gayi thhi panno par...
...kalam kahin door padi hai....
sar takiye mein chupa hua,
bas siskiya le raha hai...
khato ke tukde hai....
khwahisho ke tukde hain udte hue....
anlikhe, anpadhe...
koi nazar phira ke jo khada hai....
woh khat jo kitne chote thhe...
yeh khat jo khali hai....
woh judai jo kitni lambi hai...
yeh zindagi .....mere khato se bhi zyada viraan
5 comments:
thats an evocative one, shadows!!
:)
first two para's were enuf for me...
I did want to write something worthwhile and in sync with ur post... but I m lacking words for it ... I don't know what do I say?
Some comforting words?
Or some lectures?
Or deserving praises?
Luv,
Pheebes
velu...thanks...the question is what was the evocation?.....
need a proper translation for it....
adi.....well i liked the last bit....i mean the way it ends....
pheebes....thanks...no praises required, i dont know what sync is thr to my post anyway....random writing, from a very out of the senses aparna.....
shadows has been totally out of senses for very long now...guess need a hold on myself.....and i lose it everytime i hear his hurt sad voice.....destroyal is happening from both ends....i had bargained only for this side....
good afternoon shadows, congratulations, u r also getting spam comments now ;)
ADI
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